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Week 8 Comments and Feedback

 

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1. Feedback in. I think I am not receiving as many comments on this account as I am with Indian epics. However, this could just be because I am writing a storybook and so the people have nothing to comment on since I am not writing stories for it quite yet. 

 

2. Feedback out. I think I am leaving decent comments for the other students, I am not sure what I can do better but I do want to give better advice on projects. 

 

3. Blog comments.I do think that my introduction post is a good way to get to know me, I could maybe add more pictures and details about my personal life, but I think I am doing a pretty good job as it is. 


4. Looking forward. I think I want to make more changes to my introduction maybe include pictures of stuff I have mentioned in my post? that could help.

 

5. Image. Hehe I like this cat picture because they are sharing a milkshake and they're fluffy :)

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